Monday, 21 July 2014

Candy Floss Planet???

Today we continued our descriptive language focus and we had a look at the picture below. As a class we brainstormed words that describe this picture, such as...

spectacular, dark, lonely, spooky, majestic, cold, isolated 

After we completed a brainstorm we all created a passage of writing based on this picture. 

What do YOU think is happening in this picture? Post your ideas in the comment below.




2 comments:

  1. I think jealous Jack has runaway with whacky William's magnificent pencil, and he is still running frantically to escape the arms of William's fiesty revenge!!!!
    Miss B 😃

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    1. Haha! Great descriptive writing Miss B!!!

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